Almost there... March 9th, 2015

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This entry is mostly here for self accountability. Over the last two weeks, I've written a total of 7 pages for the new first chapter of the D.T.A. reboot. I'm pretty happy with the results so far, but I'm having some thoughts about certain things, like whether I should include the original TG transformation scene/description or not. I have several options here, including writing a new description based on the new transformations from Sailor Moon Crystal, or just alluding to the transformation, thereby giving the following scene with Jason a different feel entirely. Either way, I'm gonna try not to over-think all of this and completely stall myself here, but I do feel that the first chapter is very important here though, since its the audience's introduction to the two main characters, the initial plot, and my only real chance to drag my readers into the story. Hopefully, knowing where I want to go with the story following said chapter, the rest of the chapter updates won't take so long to craft, but, you know... "own worst critic" and all that...  

More to come soon. :) 
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Leave the transformation Scean alone I feel it is perfect Mercury on the otherhand
if it an't broke don't fix it